I am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you
Wednesday, September 18, 2019
Draft - The Hare And The Tortoise by NZ Play
Today we went to a show it was could the Hare and the Tortoise it was about slow and steady win's the race.When the Hare wonted to win the race. Because he had won in every race ever. The people were the Hare,Tortoise,piped piper,the ginger bread man and Humpty Dumpty. Humpty Dumpty was strong at the start the ginger bread man and the Hare had a race and the Hare. Wasted the ginger bread man then a tortoise came and the ginger bread man had a idea his idea was to get the tortoise in a race.With the hare. the hare was wining but some one came and chraped the hare in a cage. when the tortoise was.Nelly at the finish line she did not know if she shod save him or finish the race she save him but it toke a long time.When the hare got out he said to the piped piper something then it stopped.
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