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Friday, September 24, 2021

T3 Asttle writing

 22 September 2021


WALT:  Express myself in Narrative Writing


As the sun slowly set, two girls Ruby and Cj were calibrating new years by taking a bus ride deep in a dark green Jungle. They were two best friends.  Cj had dark brown hair and when she was in the sunlight it turned a golden colour.  Cj had dark brown eyes that looked like black, Ruby had ginger hair with blue eyes Ruby was allergic to strawberries so Cj tried not to eat them.  As they went into the bus and looked at the man driving the bus they both knew by the look he was cranky his name was Jake and he had black hair, they couldn’t see his eyes because his hair covered them.  Five hours later they arrived in the Jungle for a walk then headed back to the bus and carried on their journey.  Ruby leaped out of the bus and started to jog. Cj slowly followed her.  When they decided to turn around they had a quick snack, but when they got back Jake put the pedal to the mettle leaving them behind. It was because he saw a red dragon coming.


Lost

“What the” cried Cj “Where lost and he left us behind?”  Ruby  and Cj had to find their way back, They were both angry and confused why he left.  Ruby suggested “I’ll collect food and you make a shouter that will keep us through the night.”  When Ruby returned to the camp site with the food it was still sunset, They both weren't looking forward to the night.  Ten hours later both Ruby and Cj woke up by a howling sound  that spoucked them both out the sound got louder and louder Ruby wispeard “there's  a animal bigger than an elephant looking at us?”  Cj replied with “It's a dragon.”  Cj went to pat the dragon but it didn’t bite her.  Ruby and Cj were shocked “It didn’t bite her?” Wondering Ruby in Cj’s mind she thought “Is this a dream?”  The dragon was very curious Ruby jumped on it’s back.  Then Cj, The dragon flew off Cj yelled “Ruby I think I should steer because I can ride a horse!!!”  


Then Ruby switched sides; she spotted the town they lived in and told Cj “Stop!”  The dragon dashed to the ground and they hopped off the dragon flew away then Ruby and Cj lived happily ever after.       


        


           


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